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AI:
Understood. Please provide the first student response.
Teacher:
"J.M. Barrie creates a moody mood with his description of the Jolly Roger. The author said the Jolly
Roger 'law low in the water.' When he says it lay low, that makes me think of unhappy and a scary
feeling. He also describes it as a 'rakish looking' object. Rakish means unpleasant and shady
feeling."
AI:
Good start! Your claim about the mood being moody is a bit general. Be more specific with your word
choice. Use adjectives that accurately describe the mood, such as eerie, ominous, or foreboding.
Additionally, your evidence is somewhat incomplete. You only provided one piece of evidence from the
text, when there are several other descriptive phrases that help create the mood. Try to incorporate
more evidence from the text to strengthen your argument.
Finally, your reasoning needs to be more explicit in connecting your evidence to your claim. How
does the phrase "lay low in the water" contribute to the eerie mood? What makes the Jolly Roger's
rakish appearance unpleasant and shady? Make sure to explain the connections between your evidence
and your claim clearly and logically. Keep up the good work!